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The bar chart below shows the percentage of people in five age groups who used online grocery shopping services in a particular country in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The student's report (122 words)
The bar chart shows the percentage of people in five age groups who use online grocery shopping services in a country in 2024. According to the chart, people aged 25-34 was the biggest users of online grocery shopping with 82%. The 35-44 group is second with 76 percent, and the youngest group 18-24 had 68%. On the other hand, older people use this service less. The 45-54 age group was 68% and the people over 55 had only 35%, which is the lowest of all. This is maybe because old people do not know how to use internet and they prefer to go to the market. In conclusion, the young and middle aged people use online grocery shopping more than old people.
Estimated Writing Task 1 band
Modest user
You found the most important groups, which is a good start.
Fix this next
Write an overview straight after your introduction that states the main trend: use was highest for 25–34 and generally fell with age.
Introduction-এর ঠিক পরেই একটি overview লিখুন যেখানে মূল trend থাকবে: 25–34 group-এ ব্যবহার সবচেয়ে বেশি ছিল এবং বয়স বাড়ার সাথে সাথে সাধারণত কমেছে।
- 2
Check every number against the chart before you finish: 45–54 was 58%, not 68%.
শেষ করার আগে প্রতিটি সংখ্যা chart-এর সাথে মিলিয়ে নিন: 45–54 group ছিল 58%, 68% নয়।
- 3
Use the past simple for 2024 data, and describe only what the chart shows (no reasons or opinions).
২০২৪ সালের data-র জন্য past simple ব্যবহার করুন, এবং শুধু chart-এ যা দেখানো আছে তাই লিখুন (কোনো কারণ বা মতামত নয়)।
Examiner's comment
You found the most important groups, which is a good start. However, your report has no overview at the start, misreports one key figure, and includes a guess about the causes, which Task 1 does not ask for. Your verb tenses also switch between present and past, even though the data is from 2024. At 122 words, the report is under the 150-word minimum, so Task Achievement is limited to band 5.
আপনি সবচেয়ে গুরুত্বপূর্ণ group-গুলো খুঁজে পেয়েছেন, যা একটি ভালো শুরু। তবে আপনার report-এর শুরুতে কোনো overview নেই, একটি গুরুত্বপূর্ণ figure ভুল লেখা হয়েছে, এবং কারণ নিয়ে একটি অনুমান আছে, যা Task 1-এ চাওয়া হয় না। Data ২০২৪ সালের হলেও আপনার tense present ও past-এর মধ্যে বদলে গেছে। ১২২ শব্দে report-টি ১৫০ শব্দের কম, তাই Task Achievement band 5-এ সীমিত।
Task Achievement
5 / 9
You pick out the highest and lowest groups, but there is no overview of the main trend, one key figure is wrong (45–54 was 58%, not 68%), and the report is under 150 words.
আপনি সবচেয়ে বেশি ও সবচেয়ে কম group দুটি ঠিকভাবে বেছে নিয়েছেন, কিন্তু মূল trend-এর কোনো overview নেই, একটি গুরুত্বপূর্ণ figure ভুল (45–54 group ছিল 58%, 68% নয়), এবং report-টি ১৫০ শব্দের কম।
- You correctly identify 25–34 as the highest group (82%) and 55+ as the lowest (35%).
- Your introduction paraphrases the question rather than copying it.
- Add an overview after the introduction, e.g. 'Overall, use was highest among 25–34-year-olds and generally fell with age.'
- Check every figure against the chart: the 45–54 group used the services at 58%, not 68%.
- Remove the guess about why older people shop less. Task 1 describes the data only.
2 mistakes to fix
- 5data / taskBeforeThe 45-54 age group was 68%AfterThe figure for the 45–54 age group was 58%
The chart shows 58% for this group, not 68%.Why?
Chart-এ এই group-এর জন্য 58% দেখানো আছে, 68% নয়।
- 6data / taskBeforeThis is maybe because old people do not know how to use internet and they prefer to go to the market.After(Remove this sentence.)
Task 1 asks you to describe the data, not to guess the reasons.Why?
Task 1-এ data বর্ণনা করতে বলা হয়, কারণ অনুমান করতে নয়।
Coherence & Cohesion
6 / 9
The report is organised into clear paragraphs that move from younger to older groups, but the comparison is mostly a list of numbers.
Report-টি পরিষ্কার paragraph-এ সাজানো এবং কম বয়সী থেকে বেশি বয়সী group-এর দিকে এগিয়েছে, কিন্তু তুলনাগুলো বেশিরভাগই সংখ্যার তালিকা।
- Grouping the younger and older age groups into separate paragraphs is a sensible plan.
- Compare groups directly, e.g. 'less than half the rate of the 25–34 group', instead of listing each figure.
Lexical Resource
5 / 9
Vocabulary for describing data is limited and repeated (was, had, use), and some phrases are informal.
Data বর্ণনা করার vocabulary সীমিত এবং বারবার একই শব্দ (was, had, use) ব্যবহার হয়েছে, আর কিছু phrase informal।
- 'the biggest users' and 'the lowest of all' show you can compare.
- Learn data phrases such as 'accounted for', 'the figure for', 'followed by' and 'just over half'.
- Avoid informal phrases like 'This is maybe because' in an academic report.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
6 / 9
Sentences are mostly accurate, but you switch between present and past tense even though the data is from 2024, and there is a subject-verb agreement error.
বাক্যগুলো বেশিরভাগই সঠিক, কিন্তু data ২০২৪ সালের হওয়া সত্ত্বেও আপনি present ও past tense মিশিয়ে ফেলেছেন, এবং একটি subject-verb agreement-এর ভুল আছে।
- You use a relative clause correctly: 'which is the lowest of all'.
- The chart shows 2024, a finished year, so use the past simple throughout (used, was, were).
- Plural subjects need plural verbs: 'people aged 25–34 were'.
5 mistakes to fix
- 1grammarBeforewho use online grocery shopping services in a country in 2024Afterwho used online grocery shopping services in a particular country in 2024
2024 is in the past, so the verb should be past simple.Why?
২০২৪ সাল অতীত, তাই verb-টি past simple হবে।
- 2grammarBeforepeople aged 25-34 was the biggest usersAfterpeople aged 25–34 were the biggest users
'People' is plural, so use 'were'.Why?
'People' বহুবচন, তাই 'were' হবে।
- 3grammarBeforeThe 35-44 group is secondAfterThe 35–44 group was second
Keep the past tense for 2024 data.Why?
২০২৪ সালের data-র জন্য past tense বজায় রাখুন।
- 4grammarBeforeolder people use this service lessAfterolder people used this service less
Past simple again: the data describes 2024.Why?
আবার past simple: data-টি ২০২৪ সালের।
- 7grammarBeforethe young and middle aged people useAfteryoung and middle-aged people used
Write 'middle-aged' with a hyphen, drop 'the' for general groups, and use the past tense.Why?
'Middle-aged' hyphen দিয়ে লিখুন, সাধারণ group-এর আগে 'the' বাদ দিন, এবং past tense ব্যবহার করুন।
Your report, one band higher
Improved · 127 words
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people in five age groups who used online grocery shopping services in a particular country in 2024. Overall, online grocery shopping was most popular among people aged 25 to 34, and its use generally declined with age, with the oldest group showing by far the lowest figure. The 25–34 age group had the highest rate of use, at 82%. This was followed by those aged 35–44, at 76%, while 68% of the youngest group, aged 18–24, shopped for groceries online. Usage was noticeably lower among older people. Just over half (58%) of those aged 45–54 used these services, and the figure fell to only 35% for people aged 55 and over, less than half the rate of the 25–34 group.
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