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Part 2 · cue card
Describe a time when someone gave you something you really wanted.
What the student said
“Um I would like to talk about a time when uh my father give me a mobile phone. It was in 2019, uh, when I passed my SSC exam. I wanted it because um all my friends have a smartphone and I need it for my online class. My father bought it from a shop in Dhaka. When I received it, I feel very happy and uh excited. I still use this phone, and it remind me my father's love.”
Estimated bandBeta
5.0
Fluency & Coherence
5
Lexical Resource
5
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
5
Pronunciation
6
Dreamy's estimate from what it heard, to show you what to work on. It isn't an official IELTS score: Dreamy's marking is still being checked against Shirin Akter's, and for now it judges pronunciation from your words, not your sound.
Work on these first
- Speak for the full two minutesপুরো দুই মিনিট কথা বলুন
- Keep a past story in the past tenseঅতীতের গল্প past tense-এ বলুন
Dreamy's full feedback
A clear, relevant answer that is too short for Part 2. Speak for the full two minutes and keep the story in the past tense.
প্রাসঙ্গিক ও পরিষ্কার উত্তর, তবে Part 2-এর জন্য খুব ছোট। পুরো দুই মিনিট কথা বলুন এবং গল্পটি past tense-এ রাখুন।
Fluency & Coherence 5: You kept going and followed the cue card in order, but the answer was short and you paused often to find words.
Lexical Resource 5: Everyday words were used correctly, but there were few topic words or idioms.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy 5: Simple sentences were mostly correct, but past tenses slipped in the story.
Pronunciation 6: Estimated from the transcript: most words were recognised clearly, so you were easy to follow.
Mistakes
- my father give me a mobile phone → my father gave me a mobile phone (grammar) The story happened in the past, so use the past tense.
- it remind me my father's love → it reminds me of my father's love (grammar) 'It' takes 'reminds', and 'remind' needs 'of' before the thing remembered.
Describe a time when someone gave you something you really wanted.
Good structure; add detail to each point.
Book method
Followed: Started the way the book shows; Covered every point on the cue card. Missing: Vocabulary and idioms from the book.
Improved answer
I would like to talk about a time when my father gave me a smartphone that I had wanted for a long time. It was in 2019, just after I passed my SSC exam…
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